The poetry of Amanda Joy.
almost an engineering problem ... and yet this pithy piece has more dimensions that can be measured by t-square or compass
quite good! yes, I really attached to it.
Nice. I wonder how much is animal and how much human. Here may be an opposing sentiment...http://wisage7.blogspot.com/2010/06/this-mind.html
Slightly claustrophobic, with echoes of Daedalus and Icarus trapped in the Labrynth at Crete. A suggestion, perhaps undermining the ambiguity of "animal", though I don't think so. Specify which animal.
perfected hesitation, perplexed designation, smart, subtly sexy, and a title which leads in many directions. excellent.
i like the use of 'her' instead of (the possible) 'me'/ catch you a bit of guard.
Thanks Sigerson! I hadn't considered the engineering. :)Nice to see you Jhon, glad you enjoyed.Hi Thomas, even Stevens i reckon ;)Thanks Bob, the human animal methinks. Thanks you muchly Dale. cheers Dhyan!Graham :)
Post a Comment