She has become the hollow room
of this house with its black throat
Her hands are holding
a porcelain cup
I’ll use this truth later, but here,
this stealing is done with
fingers, even ones holding
keys of doors
still
this is a borrowing, I will
borrow your hands, I will
place them
on
my chest, I will
be the wanky fucker
who discerns
my own enjambment, I will
strip the face off
this poem
until
it bleeds gently
into this
patient tongue
of sea lapping smooth the rocks,
gulping down
the swimmers who can’t
12 comments:
the swimmers who can't
love the ambiguous and ominous ending
it bleeds gently
I love the opening image. this poem, as do so many of yours, speaks to me.
Wow - this is one of the most creative and touching pieces I have read on this blog!
A.Joy, this is soooo good. See you Thursday
Always a pleasure to read your new work Amanda... that closing line kicked hard!
Everyone said almost everything.
I will just let you know I really like this one.
nice, Amanda.
I'm happy the goddess is back. this is illuminating.
A phrase from a popular song my daughter listens to came to mind reading this - "a kiss with a fist." Not a pulled punch, not a knockout blow, just enough of a touch of the dark to let you know it's there and has made an impact. I particularly liked the enjambment lines.
Amanda, I'm pleased to have stumbled upon your blog and look forward to reading more of your work!
Hi Amanda, I'm pleased to have stumbled upon your blog and look forward to reading more of your work !
Amanda,
this one is a playful waterfall ... yet assertive.
i was struck by 'I’ll use this truth later, but here, / this stealing is done with / fingers' ...
(verb) in the title made me smile.
noxy
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