Tonight we spoke like a frequency graph,
Like a landscape without edges,
Extruded strokes of light to my lips like fingers
stretching through the architecture of your words.
To cocoon the sounds in my ear longer
I scavenge images to furnish this room
that holds you in sprawling pieces
with feathered edges that overlap and repel.
I smear the walls with my tender vision.
This passage doesn’t permit complexity.
A blocked aperture half-closed
the debris left by a fragment fallen
from the frozen eye of the storm.
It obstructs my view of your dislocation.
Someone coughs in the background.
Your voice lowers to a soft tendril,
I hear your body turn in your sheets
As you describe the darkness
that stares back at you.
In these implicit movements I accrue
the inescapable graduation of weightless light
that reaches from me to you under a heavy winter.
Colour will slide in the morning
over the outline of your refuge.
(like an unfinished house)
Like music climbs through those sounds.
6 comments:
your words look good in black....especially these ones..playing with that subtle movement, always connected, moving in, moving out...thats it damn it your poems breath...lol i look for poetry on the wind and in yours now i see the wind in poetry. AE x.
I love your new "home" and hope this posts!
I am in awe of your creativity and humbled to call you a friend. Brad
Amanda, these poems are timeless!
Thanks so much for your comments you lot,
I am really enjoying having this space here also.
Eventually I intend to shift off myspace by and large and over here.. stay posted..
xox
Wonderful last verse!
You would leave lovely MySpace? I enjoy having a presence both places. Though, with all my multiple blogging, I am now doing some duplication.
I find that some people have trouble accessing MySpace, while others don't spend much time anywhere else, so I try to cater for all.
your site looks good - liked the poetry
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