Sunday, February 6, 2011

Architecture

Always the animal
in her, unable to find a room
long enough to get a bit of speed up
in.















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8 comments:

  1. almost an engineering problem ... and yet this pithy piece has more dimensions that can be measured by t-square or compass

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  2. quite good! yes, I really attached to it.

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  3. Nice. I wonder how much is animal and how much human. Here may be an opposing sentiment...

    http://wisage7.blogspot.com/2010/06/this-mind.html

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  4. Slightly claustrophobic, with echoes of Daedalus and Icarus trapped in the Labrynth at Crete. A suggestion, perhaps undermining the ambiguity of "animal", though I don't think so. Specify which animal.

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  5. perfected hesitation, perplexed designation, smart, subtly sexy, and a title which leads in many directions. excellent.

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  6. i like the use of 'her' instead of (the possible) 'me'/ catch you a bit of guard.

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  7. Thanks Sigerson! I hadn't considered the engineering. :)

    Nice to see you Jhon, glad you enjoyed.

    Hi Thomas, even Stevens i reckon ;)

    Thanks Bob, the human animal methinks.

    Thanks you muchly Dale.

    cheers Dhyan!

    Graham :)

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