Thursday, September 17, 2009

Harmonic Points

One metre is one ten-millionth
of the distance from the Equator
to the North Pole through Paris

This is a useful measurement

Then there is the truth of ratios:
a bird’s wingspan to a room,
the opening in the window
it entered through, then lost.
The weight of a pair of hands
trying to free it. There is the lonely
side of dialogue. The pieces
of the map and the ground
covered by your body when you fall.
The cleverness you trail like
a comet. The circus and the flea.
Edson’s ambushed stone to
the size of his mother’s love. Some
giddy slippage, to all the harmonic
points on a line to infinity.
The curved eyeball to the keyhole
of the hostage, then, the walls of
the captive. Lullaby of bedrock
to all it cradles. The hollow
of your hand to what I would fill
it with. The rose and what rose.
There’s writing on both sides
of the paper. The sensation
of speaking in tongues. All those
centred deities of blind voyeurs
to the spectrum of a single note.
The other side of the river to
a fish. Totems and guttered stars.
Death, ash, fire, warmth and smoke.
A forced song of almost someone
in so many breaths, there is also this:

Made flesh: what I take in
from what was said.

48 comments:

  1. this is brilliant amanda... so many great points of reference. there is definitely always writing on both sides of the paper.

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  2. There is also this - your words are at times like a the skin of a naked curve: the arc of a hip; a thigh's swift contour; globes of the body.

    And I won't even call you poetry lady.

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  3. "The hollow
    of your hand to what I would fill
    it with. The rose and what rose.
    There’s writing on both sides
    of the paper."

    Fascinating! Your soul is the vessel where wonder can flourish. I love how you write, how with beauty you nourish! Keep it up.

    ~Kaff~

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  4. I knew I would find you again. Your words are a golden thread. I have slain a few minotaurs in the interim. You?

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  5. Anthony!! I'm so happy I can barely type! Me? yes, it has been some interim...

    xox

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  6. @Graham, thank you, enjoy Terrigal!

    @Je.. thank you.. and well resisted!

    @Kaff, that has to be one of the best messages I've been left..and especially for rhyming! thank you!

    I really enjoyed writing this one a lot..

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  7. oh & ... happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you, happy birthday Mr Maverick, happy birthday to you.. sorry it was a little off key.. I'm still not drinking coffee.. :D

    xx

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  8. It's ok. I couldn't really hear you from here. :P

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  9. Mandy...i find these words so comforting.

    thank you for posting your gifted words.

    tan xx

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  10. i've always loved your poems. and now, you surprise me again with another illuminating piece.

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  11. How can you come with such poem? I am like singing while reading it.

    Got a a fan here.

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  12. Interesting the way this one measures and weighs itself, with its splendid ending, nice.

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  13. This is wonderful, Amanda. The linkage between sentences: simultaneously resisting outright narrative, outright motif, outright parataxis. A beautiful balancing act.

    By the way, congratulations on your inclusion in Adamson's anthology. :)

    *waves at TC*

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  14. many lines i really like in here, the odd one that doesn't get me. or i get it. or something is not gotten. or something I'VE forgotten...
    and a beautiful, righteous ending. my faverave lines:
    "Lullaby of bedrock
    to all it cradles. The hollow
    of your hand to what I would fill
    it with. The rose and what rose.
    There’s writing on both sides
    of the paper." and
    "
    The other side of the river to
    a fish. Totems and guttered stars.
    Death, ash, fire, warmth and smoke. "
    il mat (and you know what THAT means, non?)

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  15. Your math is very poetic. Your poetry is very precise.

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  16. This is showing your poetry is even better than it was I feel - intense but delicate and balanced as well, something like that. I like this a lot. Richard

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  17. So much feeling conveyed through such wonderfully tuned words. This stretches my eye and lifts my heart. Thanks.

    Guillaume

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  18. beauty, intelligent and interesting
    above all - a great read. to read again and again. and yet, come to it again, to see how one has changed.

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  19. Wow.. You write very beautiful poetry. How I wish I'm able to write like you =)
    Anw, it's a really beautiful poem. Care to check out mine? =)Will appreciate it if u give me some comments. Thanks.

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  20. First time to your blog. great!! writings on two sides of the same paper...

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  21. i am visiting your blog for the first time..

    this was great..i very much enjoyed it...

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  22. "...The sensation
    of speaking in tongues. All those
    centred deities of blind voyeurs
    to the spectrum of a single note.
    The other side of the river to
    a fish. Totems and guttered stars.
    Death, ash, fire, warmth and smoke."

    Brilliant. Youve won a fan. Congratulations! :)

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  23. thoroughly enjoyed this one on a particularly thorny thursday...so thanks, for making me stop and look around. www.ryanbuynak.com

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  24. wow, fantastic stuff, Amanda!

    my fav bits:

    'a bird’s wingspan to a room,'

    &

    'The cleverness you trail like
    a comet.'

    I love that you've got such a long list of comparisons and avoided redundancies and kept me guessing as to what will come next!
    thanks!
    ashley

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  25. "The other side of the river to a fish." This poem is loaded with pocket water. Wow.

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  26. i love this poem.
    keep up the good stuff!:):)
    plus, this is my first visit, i so loved it.
    haapy writting!:D

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  27. Congratulations ... to the Poetry Ranking's

    POET

    OF

    THE

    YEAR!

    Enjoy!

    Blessings, Linda

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  28. to A special Joy

    your every word
    a single stroke
    of hummingbirds wing
    together in flight
    they sing
    and the hum
    becomes a roar

    dEj 10.15.07

    Congratulations poet of the year!

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  29. Congratulations on being named poet of the year on poetry blog rankings.

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  31. This is beautiful, the metaphors flow subterranean, like life under life. Keep writing!
    Kari from b'ham

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  32. It's a good morning. Why don't you write more?

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  33. very cool poem. crafted

    check out my blog

    it is about random creative experiments that started with a random piece of writing (see the first post)

    http://00narayana00.blogspot.com/

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  34. Great writing, Amanda. I'm glad I found your site.

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  35. i don't know why, but this somehow reminds me of sylvia plath. its absolutely beautiful. :)

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  36. I just found this site, and love it.

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  37. Diggin it! Congratulations on such a well supported blog! Keep up the good work, all of your readers appreciate it!

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  38. i'm quite a fan of the micro-edit myself, but really...

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