Monday, June 16, 2008

Loss

In the tuart roots
five metres underground
the chamber moaned
as the air dried out

3 comments:

Don MacIver said...

Amanda, your words transform ideas into amazing literary journeys and images to grace the mind and soul.

Don MacIver

fringemonkey said...

Come here by way of PBR and Je' Maverick. Love your work. I much prefer this blog to your MySpace blog as it loads much more quickly and is relatively clutter-free.
I very much enjoy your verse. You do very well to create the image/impression/emotion in lines with sensible breath and concision. That's a rare talent in these days of meandering free verse!
David

James Michael said...

hey amanda,
great to find a fellow poet.
tell me how do you feel about mine?
james.